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You Sold Me a Fake by tht-tne You Sold Me a Fake by tht-tne
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i don't normally post works in progress... but i thought you guys could help.
i would appriciate any kind of feed back for this guy. i have no clue what to do with it and it's so lacking a lot. suggestions... questions comments concerns?
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unImago Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Already finished it?
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tht-tne Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
No actully it still looks exactly like that, i'm not sure i wanna deal with it.
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unImago Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Hmm...
The main elements are pre-set now, otherwise I'd propose an additional element above in the sky or beneath on the ground.
She seems quite finished for me.
So I'd propose something coming out of the building, interacting with her, it should be quite dark so it can overlap her.
Something like arms or a machine or tentacles, whatever.
If that's not a solution I'd propose something from behind her, maybe out of a door of the building.
Or another person standing next to her, in front of the wall part, that is in front of the watcher.
Like Adam and Eva in modern times, and they got sold a fake life.
Or you could leave it as it is, as a memorial/cenotaph for something I can't name right now.
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Silvel Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
The first thing that come to my mind would be to cover the buildings with patterns similar as her dress. But I think it's hard to obtain something really great when it doesn't come out naturally and you ask yourself those questions. Must throw out sometimes :(
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conatgion Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2010
strangly, the variety of her clothing seems just as empty as the abstracted buildings
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BADrawing Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
really great and meaningful in this pop DA works!
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leothefox Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009   General Artist
I'm not sure what you're going for, but I love it as is.
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tht-tne Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
i don't know it just has that you're-not-done-with-me-feeling you know what i mean?
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